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What do you expect will be the hardest part of being a mother?

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Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some people also dies when giving birth.
Secondly, I'm a sleepy person but I will have to stay awake every 2 hours feeding the baby.
Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours will be lack of time for one day.

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Hi Helen! Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it :) See you soon! 

Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some people also dies when giving birth.
>> Firstly, I think giving birth will be the hardest part because it will be so painful that some women even die when giving birth.

Secondly, I'm a sleepy person but I will have to stay awake every 2 hours feeding the baby.
>>CORRECT

Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours will be lack of time for one day.
>>  Third, raising a child would be very tough as a working mom. I think 24 hours won't be enough. 
 
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