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When you are on the brink of giving up, what do you usually think/do to keep going?

작성자: 김*희
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When I am on the brink of giving up, I think of my future image when I will have finished the work. Then no matter how difficult the current situation is, I get the energy from myself and can cheer up again. Furthermore, I keep a diary steadily. I write down what I did today to achieve my goal and how I felt while doing the plans. I try to write down as honestly as possible. Whenever I look back at the diary and reminisce the past days, I feel proud of myself that I endured all those hard times and that I am standing here right now. Those records make me feel energized and enable me to dream a brighter future. In addition, I try to write down encouraging quotes or famous sayings on my diary. My favorite quote is "no pain, no gain". Although the process to success is difficult, I know that I have to endure it in order to gain what I want. By repeating them to myself, I try to follow the path that successful people have passed by and tell myself that I can succeed someday, too.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I also believe that no one else can trust your capability fully but you. Even if you hit rock bottom, Minhee, always believe that there are better days ahead! -Faith-
When I am on the brink of giving up, I think of my future image when I will have finished the work.
>> When I am on the brink of giving up, I picture my future when I will have finished my work.
Then no matter how difficult the current situation is, I get the energy from myself and can cheer up again.
>> Then, no matter how difficult the current situation is, I get the energy from myself and can cheer up again.
Furthermore, I keep a diary steadily.
>> CORRECT
OR: Furthermore, I always keep a journal.
I write down what I did today to achieve my goal and how I felt while doing the plans.
>> CORRECT
I try to write down as honestly as possible.
>> CORRECT
Whenever I look back at the diary and reminisce the past days, I feel proud of myself that I endured all those hard times and that I am standing here right now. 
>> Whenever I read the diary and reminisce the past days, I feel proud of myself that I endured all those hard times and that I am standing here right now. 
Those records make me feel energized and enable me to dream a brighter future.
>> Those records make me feel energetic and enable me to dream a brighter future.
In addition, I try to write down encouraging quotes or famous sayings on my diary.
>> CORRECT
My favorite quote is "no pain, no gain".
>> CORRECT
Although the process to success is painful, I know that I have to endure it in order to gain what I want. 
>> CORRECT
OR: Although the process to success is tough, I know that I need to live through it in order to pursue my goals. 
By repeating them to myself, I try to follow the path that successful people have passed by and tell myself that I can succeed someday, too.
>> CORRECT
OR: By constantly reminding myself about it, I try to follow the path that successful people have taken and tell myself that I can succeed someday, too.
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