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Because, it ia done in free time, so it can be done without being distributed by anything, and it also helpful to society by doing unpaid community work.
>>> Because, it should be done during free time, and it could be done without being distributed by anything, and it is also helpful to society to do unpaid community work.
By working as an unpaid community, it is not only an opportunity for you to learn and develop, but you can also feel proud.
>>> Unpaid work in the community is not only an opportunity for you to learn and develop, but you can also feel proud.
It is also an opportunity to learn many things.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, it is good to work in an unpaid community once in a while.
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