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In the countryside, young people become scarce in farming. But there have no young people.
So they can't farm much and they can run out of foods.
Also, there is no one who can help when something happens.
I think it would be good to go to the countryside every weekend and help the workers.
Also it would be good to volunteer.

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THANK GOD IT'S FRIDAY!
HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY EDEN!
Friday is a time to reflect and be thankful for the week. As you count your blessings, may you have reasons to be joyful.  Have a beautiful weekend. ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
In the countryside, young people become scarce in farming. 
>>> CORRECT
But there have no young people.
>>> But there are no young people.
So they can't farm much and they can run out of foods.
>>> CORRECT
Also, there is no one who can help when something happens.
>>> Also, there is no one who can help them when something happens.
I think it would be good to go to the countryside every weekend and help the workers.
>>> I think it would be better to go to the countryside every weekend and help the workers.
Also it would be good to volunteer.
>>> CORRECT

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