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Some people believe that paper books and magazines will be disappeared because they will be able to read anything online for free in the future. This contemporary society is changing to be digitalized due to technology. However, books and newspapers are not just for getting knowledges. These are the heritage for our decendants in the future.
Printed books and newspapers have existed dor a very long time as a symbol of intelligence. We have learned many things from that at school or sometimes at home. Books and newspapers are not just for means carrying knowledg. Some books are very rare and can be a good objects to study the origin of human.
However, regarding to development of technologies, people live in huge amount of information. They prefer using online or e- book instead of paper books. Because this is more convenient and mobility than books. Furthermore, they can get information for using online without paying.

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Good day Young Won! 

This is one of the strong topics you can answer really well as it is your dream to be an author someday. I am one of those who thinks that in time, printed books will be one of the good old memories and remnants of the past.

Nonetheless, we are lucky to have experienced to learn from these materials.

I will continue checking on the next part.

-T. Donna =)

Some people believe that paper books and magazines will be disappeared because they will be able to read anything online for free in the future. 
>> Some people believe that paper books and magazines will disappear because they will be able to read anything online for free in the future. 

This contemporary society is changing to be digitalized due to technology. 
>> Correct!

However, books and newspapers are not just for getting knowledges. 
>> Correct!

These are the heritage for our decendants in the future.
>> These are the heritage for our ascendant in the future.

Printed books and newspapers have existed dor a very long time as a symbol of intelligence. 
>> Correct!
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We have learned many things from that at school or sometimes at home. 
>> We have learned many things from school or sometimes at home. 

Books and newspapers are not just for means carrying knowledg. 
>> Books and newspapers are not just the means for carrying knowledge. 

Some books are very rare and can be a good objects to study the origin of human.
>> Correct!
Or: object (SINGULAR NOUN)

However, regarding to development of technologies, people live in huge amount of information.
>>  However, regarding the development of technologies, people live in huge amount of information.

They prefer using online or e- book instead of paper books. Because this is more convenient and mobility than books. 
>> They prefer using online or e- books instead of paper books because this is more convenient and has mobility than books. 

Furthermore, they can get information for using online without paying.
>> Furthermore, they can get information using online without paying.
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