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Don\'t know what to do..

작성자: 지*우
2021-03-31 1456

회원님의 영작문

Today was third class. Actually, i went to the university. i go to university about 2 hours.. i was so tired. So I think 'I delay once the online english class..' But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first, i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking. But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher.. When i fiil up the blanks, i don't understand my teacher intention. In the last class, i think i'am good at filling up the blanks. But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..) But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
But today, i written last class about 'i tried to tell for 15 mintues' maybe i think that i accomplish! So I always continue to try to speak english more.. until i become person fluently speak english!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
Always thank you!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Harry, 
I understand your condition as a University student. You did well in the class today and I can see your effort to participate and listen to the teacher. I like your attitude towards learning English. Keep it up and I know you will improve more. Be confident when speaking and don't be shy to speak more in the class. Keep improving your English skills.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Today was third class.
>> It's my third class today.
 Actually, i went to the university.
>>  Actually, I went to the University.
i go to university about 2 hours.
>>I went to the University for about 2 hours.
 i was so tired. 
>> I was so tired. 
>>So I think 'I delay once the online english class..'
>>  So I was thinking if I will cancel my Online English class. 
 But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first,
>>But when I think about the online class vs my present condition, I will choose the online class first. 
 i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking. 
>>  I just studied for only two days meanwhile, I really expect that I will learn a lot and improve my English speaking skills.
But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher..
>>But when I take online classes when I'm tired my teacher might notice it. 
When i fiil up the blanks, i don't understand my teacher intention. 
>> When I fill in the blanks, I didn't understand my teacher's instructions. 
In the last class, i think i'am good at filling up the blanks. 
>> In the last class, I answered correctly the fill-in-the-blanks activity.
But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..) 
>>But today I didn't answer well. (Sorry. Teacher..) 
But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
>>But my teacher was very relaxed and slowly told me the thing I needed to do to fill in the blanks correctly. 
But today, i written last class about 'i tried to tell for 15 mintues' maybe i think that i accomplish! 
>> But today, I wrote about our last class. I tried to write for 15 minutes maybe and I think that I accomplished it! 
So I always continue to try to speak english more... until i become person fluently speak english!!
>> So I always continue and try to speak English more until I become a person who fluently speaks English!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
>>In the next class, I certainly bring things that I need to speak English by myself. 
Always thank you!!
>>Always thank you!!
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Today was third class. Actually, i went to the university. i go to university about 2 hours.. i was so tired. So I think 'I delay once the online english class..' But when i think to the online vs my present condition, i think to win the online because first, i just learned only two days and second, meanwhile i really expect learning to english speaking. But when i take online class my tired condition is maybe seen to my teacher.. When i fiil up the blanks, i don't understand my teacher intention. In the last class, i think i'am good at filling up the blanks. But today was so bad..(Sorry.. Teacher..) But my teacher was very relax and slowly told me that thing i do for filling up the blanks.
But today, i written last class about 'i tried to tell for 15 mintues' maybe i think that i accomplish! So I always continue to try to speak english more.. until i become person fluently speak english!!
In the next class, I certainly bring things i speak english myself
Always thank you!!
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