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Q:What do you like about the moon?
A:I like moon because it's the only birght thing when it's night.
First, if there is no moon, then night will be darker then now.
Second, moon has many shapes so I like moon.
Last, moon is only satellite in the earth so I like moon.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work! 

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Q:What do you like about the moon?
>>> CORRECT

A:I like moon because it's the only birght thing when it's night.
>>> A:I like moon because it's the only bright thing at night.

First, if there is no moon, then night will be darker then now.
>>> First, if there is no moon, then the night will be darker than now.

Second, moon has many shapes so I like moon.
>>> Second, the moon has many shapes so I like the moon.

Last, moon is only satellite in the earth so I like moon.
>>> Last, the moon is the only satellite on the earth so I like it.
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