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If I am in the shopping mall, I will buy some beautiful clothes.

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My family say: "you are very interested at clothes" then I say: "yes, I am!", because clothes are very cute and beautiful! I love clothes. If I go to the shopping mall, First, I buy some clothes, second, eat something, lastly, buy some accessories. I then I will look like very busy business women, because I have a lot of bag and walking faster...Anyway, when I go to shopping mall I will buy some beautiful and cute clothes.

P.S. The picture is not me..but I want to be like that.

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Hi Maria!

I actually thought that the lady in the picture is you! Oh well, I believe someday, you will look like her. Shopping is what we do at the mall. So when the pandemic is over, shop 'til you drop!

Thanks for another composition. Very good!

-T. Donna =)

My family say: "you are very interested at clothes" then I say: "yes, I am!", because clothes are very cute and beautiful! 
>> My family said, "You are very interested with clothes". Then I said, "Yes, I am because clothes are very cute and beautiful!" 

I love clothes. 
>> Correct!

If I go to the shopping mall, First, I buy some clothes, second, eat something, lastly, buy some accessories. 
>> If I go to the shopping mall, first, I buy some clothes. Second, I eat something. Lastly, I buy some accessories. 

I then I will look like very busy business women, because I have a lot of bag and walking faster...
>> I then will look like a very busy business woman because I have a lot of bags and I walk faster.

Anyway, when I go to shopping mall I will buy some beautiful and cute clothes.
>> Anyway, when I go to the shopping mall I will buy some beautiful and cute clothes.

P.S. The picture is not me..but I want to be like that.
>> Correct!
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