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Will the quality of transportation in your country get better or worse?

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I think the quality of transportation is getting better and it will get better in the future. Also, I think the quality in our country is one of the best in the world. Most of transportation are clean and have good facility. But it is quite shame that most of transportation is focused on the Seoul that is a capital of Korea. I hope the gap of transportation quality between capital area and the other area will be decreased in the future.

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I think the quality of transportation is getting better and it will get better in the future. 
>> CORRECT!

Also, I think the quality in our country is one of the best in the world. 
>> Also, I think the quality of transport in our country is one of the best in the world. 

Most of transportation are clean and have good facility.
>> Most of the transportation is clean and has good facilities.

But it is quite shame that most of transportation is focused on the Seoul that is a capital of Korea. 
>> But it is quite shameful that most of the transportation is focused on Seoul, the capital of Korea. 

I hope the gap of transportation quality between capital area and the other area will be decreased in the future.
>> I hope the gap in transportation quality between the capital area and the other areas will be decreased in the future.
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