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How do you understand \"well-compensated employment\"?

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I think that well-compensated employment is quite subjective. Depending on individual values, some people may value material compensation, and other people may value social reputation or recognition as a more important compensation. Also, even if the same compensation is made in the same company, some people may satisfy with the compensation and the other may be as bad as they consider moving jobs. So, the trend of the compensation these days is that there are many selective compensation schemes. The company shows the entire compensation package and provides customized selection among them. To do so, companies are increasingly achieving 'well-compensate employment' tailored to their employees.

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Good day Gianna! You expressed your thoughts well in writing. Keep it up!
~Aki :)
I think that well-compensated employment is quite subjective. 
>>>CORRECT
OR >>> It is instinctive that people desire well-compensated employment.
Depending on individual values, some people may value material compensation, and other people may value social reputation or recognition as a more important compensation.
>>>CORRECT
OR >>> That would depend on that value that everyone has. For some, it could be material compensation and others may regard social or appreciation as a valuable compensation.
 Also, even if the same compensation is made in the same company, some people may satisfy with the compensation and the other may be as bad as they consider moving jobs. 
>>>CORRECT
OR >>> Moreover, even a fair compensation is implemented in the same company, some workers are satisfied with it, while others are not, so finding a new job is their last resort.
So, the trend of the compensation these days is that there are many selective compensation schemes. 
>>> So, the trend of compensation these days is that there are many selective compensation schemes. 
The company shows the entire compensation package and provides customized selection among them. 
>>>  The company shows the entire compensation package and provides a customized selection among them. 
To do so, companies are increasingly achieving 'well-compensate employment' tailored to their employees.
>>>CORRECT
OR >>As a result, many companies are also considering a "well-compensated employment" suitable to their employees.
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