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What are the things that make you feel safe?
There are few things that make me feel safe.
First, my cat makes me feel safe and satisfies me.
But for real, many cat researchers say that purring sounds from cats make people feel safe.
So it is scientifically proved.
Second, it's home.
Family, and home.
I think they are one of the best things that makes me feel safe.

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Hello Claire!
Great job! Keep it up! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

There are few things that make me feel safe.
>>CORRECT!
First, my cat makes me feel safe and satisfies me.
>>CORRECT!
But for real, many cat researchers say that purring sounds from cats make people feel safe.
>>CORRECT!
So it is scientifically proved.
>>So it is a scientifically proven fact.
Second, it's home.
>>CORRECT!
Family, and home.
>>It's my family and home. 
I think they are one of the best things that makes me feel safe.
>>I think they are a few of the best things that make me feel safe.
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