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What do you think of space tourism?

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I think space tourism is hard thing to do. We are not threatened with trivial things as we travel to other countries. But if we travel to space, we need to take care of any trivial things. And , going to space is not easy. To go to space, we have to train as strong as astronauts. Also we need lots of money to go to space. That is really hard to normal people. But if someone does all this, I think that person can go space tour.

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Thank you for this Amy.

I think space tourism is hard thing to do. 
>>> I think space tourism is a hard thing to do.   
We are not threatened with trivial things as we travel to other countries. 
>>> correct
>>>  OR:  We are not threatened by trivial things as we travel to other countries.  
But if we travel to space, we need to take care of any trivial things. 
>>> OR: But if we travel to space, we need to be cautious about all trivial things.   
And, going to space is not easy. 
>>> correct  
To go to space, we have to train as strong as astronauts. 
>>> correct  
Also we need lots of money to go to space. 
>>> We also need lots of money to go to space.  
That is really hard to normal people. 
>>That is really hard for normal people.   
But if someone does all this, I think that person can go space tour.
>>>  But if someone does all this, I think that person can go for a space tour.  
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