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Q:Do you believe that fortune tellers are just professional liars?
A:Yes, I believe that fortune tellers are just professional lairs.
First, future is not decided, so everyone cannot see the future of someone.
Second, if fortune teller tell someone his future and if it's bad, then he can do something difffernt with his future.
Last, there are many futures for one person, but there are 7billion people on Earth, so I believe fortune tellers are just professional lairs.

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Q: Do you believe that fortune tellers are just professional liars?

A: Yes, I believe that fortune tellers are just professional lairs.
>>> Yes, I believe that fortune tellers are just professional liars.

First, future is not decided, so everyone cannot see the future of someone.
>>> First, the future is not decided, so everyone cannot see the future of someone.

Second, if fortune teller tell someone his future and if it's bad, then he can do something difffernt with his future.
>>> Second, if a fortune teller tells someone his future and if it's bad, then he can do something different with his future because his actions will change. 

Last, there are many futures for one person, but there are 7billion people on Earth, so I believe fortune tellers are just professional lairs.
>>> Lastly, there are many things that are possible to happen in the future of one person, but there are 7 billion people on Earth, so I believe fortune tellers are just professional lairs.

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