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What has been the worst complaint in the hospital where you are working at?

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Honestly, there were some complaints that I want to recall in my hospital. And sometimes I want to don\'t take care of them anymore as a human being. But, most of the time those who are careless and violent they tend to give more attention than ordinary patients. We don't want to any issue from them. Among them, when I worked a university hospital, I had to assist a doctor who was really terrible. His asking was always more excessive than other doctors so I hated him. When he was admitted due to his chronic disease, I expressed sorry with my coworkers but in fact I thought he deserved that he was sick.

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Hi Jane!

I find this story amusing and worth picking up some good lessons. ^^ Well, in the end, we all get what we deserve, don't we? If I were you, I'd feel vindicated to what happened.

However, as a good nurse, I'm sure you showed empathy and good conduct in spite of all what he has done.

Thanks for this composition very well written!

-T. Donna =)

Honestly, there were some complaints that I want to recall in my hospital. 
>> Correct!

And sometimes I want to don\'t take care of them anymore as a human being. 
>> And sometimes I don't want to take care of them anymore as a human being. 

But, most of the time those who are careless and violent they tend to give more attention than ordinary patients. 
>> Correct!
Or: 
But, most of the time those who are careless and violent tend to give more attention than ordinary patients. 

We don't want to any issue from them. 
>> We don't want any issue from them.

Among them, when I worked a university hospital, I had to assist a doctor who was really terrible. 
>> Among them, when I worked in a university hospital, I had to assist a doctor who was really terrible. 

His asking was always more excessive than other doctors so I hated him. 
>> Correct!
Or: His orders were always more excessive than other doctors so I hated him.

When he was admitted due to his chronic disease, I expressed sorry with my coworkers but in fact I thought he deserved that he was sick.
>> Correct!
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