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Q:What is the importance of the weekend?
A:The importance of the weekend is weekend is it is the only days that we can rest in a week.
First, if there are no holiday in a week, then weekend is the only day that we can rest in a week so weekends' importance is resting.
Second, we cannot rest in the weekdays so if we don't rest in weekend, then we cannot rest all weeks.
Lastly, if we don't have weekend, then we have to work or study all days so I think the importance of weekend is resting.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



Q: What is the importance of the weekend?

A: The importance of the weekend is weekend is it is the only days that we can rest in a week.
>>> The importance of the weekends is that it is the only day that we can rest within a week.

First, if there are no holiday in a week, then weekend is the only day that we can rest in a week so weekends' importance is resting.
>>> First, if there is no holiday in a week, then the weekend is the only day that we can rest in a week so weekends' importance is for resting.

Second, we cannot rest in the weekdays so if we don't rest in weekend, then we cannot rest all weeks.
>>> Second, we cannot rest on the weekdays so if we don't rest on the weekend, then we cannot rest for the entire week.

Lastly, if we don't have weekend, then we have to work or study all days so I think the importance of weekend is resting.
>>> Lastly, if we don't have the weekend, then we have to work or study all day so I think the importance of the weekend is for resting.
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