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I thought some subjects that I have learnt in high school were useless but they are the basic knowledge to live. It was really difficult for me to study a lot of subjects and took tests in every semester. If I look back my childhood, I regret about not to study hard because if I studied hard, my life could be changed. Literature is very boring subject and difficult to memorize knowledge that might be tested. Poems are the hardest parts for me to study, because I couldn't understand what the writers want to say. I thought that if it helps my life in the future. However, all literature help students to broaden vocabulary and improve their reading skill. If we didn't study it, we couldn't get good scores on the university entrance exam because Korean language is the first subject we have to take on the test. If we didn't get enough score, we can't go to the university which we dreamed. So I think all subjects have meaning to study and help our life at some day.

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Hi there Mr. Hwang! You surprised me by doing all your homework! Anyways, questions are becoming boring hahaha but based on reality! Enjoy answering!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I thought some subjects that I have learnt in high school were useless but they are the basic knowledge to live. 
>>> CORRECT
It was really difficult for me to study a lot of subjects and took tests every semester. 
>>> CORRECT
If I look back my childhood, I regret about not to study hard because if I studied hard, my life could be changed. 
>>> If I look back my childhood, I regret about not studying hard because if I studied hard, my life could be better. 
Literature is very boring subject and difficult to memorize knowledge that might be tested. 
>>> Literature is a very boring subject and it's difficult to memorize some information that might be tested. 
Poems are the hardest parts for me to study, because I couldn't understand what the writers want to say. 
>>> CORRECT
I thought that if it helps my life in the future. 
>>> I thought that it would help my life in the future. 
However, all literature help students to broaden vocabulary and improve their reading skill.
>>> However, all literature help students to broaden their vocabulary and improve their reading skills.
If we didn't study it, we couldn't get good scores on the university entrance exam because Korean language is the first subject we have to take on the test.
>>> CORRECT
 If we didn't get enough score, we can't go to the university which we dreamed.
>>>  If we didn't get enough score, we can't go to the university we were dreaming of. 
 So I think all subjects have meaning to study and help our life at some day.
>>>  So, I think all subjects are meaningful to study and could help us in our life at someday.
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