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Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more? Why or why not?

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I think that governments should make public transport more.
Now, they are almost inconvenient In another cities excepting Seoul and metropolitan cities.
Easily available subway is only in the Seoul and metropolitan cities.
In another cities, the subway stations have long gap each other or don't exist.
Fortunately, they usually have city bus.
However, the city bus interval is almost long, and the stations are short of number, so people have lack to move.
When I'm in another cities, moving through public transport is very inconvenient.
I usually use a taxi, or my friend's car.
Therefore, I think making more public transport is need by government.
There are many people who can't drive for any reasons. It is me too.
I have driver licence, but I can't drive, because achieving that is been a longtime.
I wish to have the world that don't need private car, and people can travel anywhere.

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Hello Kang!

Thanks for sending your answer.  Aim higher! :)


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I think that governments should make public transport more.

>>I think that the government should make more public transport.
 Now, they are almost inconvenient In another cities excepting Seoul and metropolitan cities.

>>Due to the lack of public transportation, it is inconvenient for other cities except Seoul and the metropolis.
 Easily available subway is only in the Seoul and metropolitan cities.

>>The subway is easily available only in Seoul and the metropolis.
 In another cities, the subway stations have long gap each other or don't exist.

>>In other cities, the subway stations have a long gap with each other or they don't exist at all.
 Fortunately, they usually have city bus.

>>Fortunately, they still have city buses to ride on.
 However, the city bus interval is almost long, and the stations are short of number, so people have lack to move.

>>However, the city bus' interval is long and the stations are short of number.  So people struggle to move.
 When I'm in another cities, moving through public transport is very inconvenient.

>>When I'm in another city, moving to another place to get a public transport is very inconvenient.
 I usually use a taxi, or my friend's car.

>>I ususally use a taxi or my friend's car.
 Therefore, I think making more public transport is need by government.

>>Therefore, I think making public transport accessible to all must be given by the government.
 There are many people who can't drive for any reasons. It is me too.

>>I think there are many people who can't drive for many reasons. 

I have driver licence, but I can't drive, because achieving that is been a longtime.

>>I have a driver's license, but I can't drive becasue it takes a long time to get it.
 I wish to have the world that don't need private car, and people can travel anywhere.

>>I wish to live in a world where we didn't need any private cars and we could travel anywhere.


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