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What exotic foods do you want to try and why?

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There are no exotic foods that I want to try. Because I don't know exotic foods well. But I recently want to eat curry with nan.

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Hi Seong! ^^

I heard Curry with Naan bread is good too! 

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There are no exotic foods that I want to try. Because I don't know exotic foods well. 
>> There is no exotic food I want to try because I don't know much about it. 

But I recently want to eat curry with nan.
>> But I recently want to eat curry with Naan bread. 

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