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What\'s the most difficult English skill for you?

작성자: 류*선
2021-09-01 274

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Speaking skill is hard for me because when I speak English, I feel very nervous.
When I have to speak English in a large group, I often become speechless. I get stressed a lot at this time.
Some of the teachers who taught me English said to me, "Just speak!!"
But when I listened to their lesson, it was hard for me.
because I'm confused about how to make sentences when I have to express details about that.
Since I came to the USA, I have taken an English class for 5months. During the class, I didn't say anything except "Hi, Bye, Thank you!".
Because I didn't know English at all. So I tried to only listen for 5 months at the class. It was a difficult time. I wanted to give up every time. I thought that If I had known little English, I would have spoken many words to classmates and teachers.

First of all, I want to understand the questions somebody asks me.
And then I want to express and speak up my opinion through general expressions in English.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good job, Jane! Apparently, you have good writing skills! I know you can overcome your situation or emotion. I hope that through this lesson, we can boost  your confidence!-Faith-
Speaking skill is hard for me because when I speak English, I feel very nervous.
>> CORRECT
OR English speaking skills are challenging for me because I feel anxious when I speak.
When I have to speak English in a large group, I often become speechless. 
>> When I have to speak English in a large group of people, I often become speechless. 
I get stressed a lot at this time.
>> CORRECT
Some of the teachers who taught me English said to me, "Just speak!!"
 >> CORRECT
OR Some of my English teachers told me to just talk.
But when I listened to their lesson, it was hard for me.
>> CORRECT
because I'm confused about how to make sentences when I have to express details about that.
>> It's because I'm confused about how to make sentences when I have to express details about that.
Since I came to the USA, I have taken an English class for 5months. 
>> Since I came to the USA, I have taken an English class for five months. 
During the class, I didn't say anything except "Hi, Bye, Thank you!". Because I didn't know English at all. 
>> During the class, I didn't say anything except, "Hi," "Bye," and "Thank you"  because I didn't know English at all. 
So I tried to only listen for 5 months at the class.
>> So, I tried to only listen for 5 months in class. 
It was a difficult time.
>> CORRECT
I wanted to give up every time.
>> CORRECT
I thought that If I had known little English, I would have spoken many words to classmates and teachers.
I thought that If I had known a little English, I could speak many words to my classmates and teachers.
First of all, I want to understand the questions somebody asks me.
>> CORRECT
OR Most importantly, I want to understand someone's questions.
And then I want to express and speak up my opinion through general expressions in English.
>> And then I want to express and speak up my opinions through general expressions in English.
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