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What one element glues a relationship tightly? Share your answer in a few sentences.

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회원님의 영작문

I think proper respect is one of the most important element for strengthening the long-term relationship. Even for a really close relationship like the family, I think one need a respect to maintain the relationship healthy. It is more easy to overlook the importance of respect as closer the relationship is. However, if one forget to respect the other repetitively, it will hurt the other continuously which will eventually ruin the relationship. We sometimes misunderstood a close person as a outlet of our emotion, and tried to express all the negative emotions like irritation or annoyance to there. We easily confuse that close people can always accept me and be still with us, but it's not true. We should always be aware that even the closest person get stressed when the other walk over one repetitively, and the one can leave us someday. Thus, it is important to show appropriate respect to the close person.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Vicky!

Respect covers a vast scope of values and virtues within a relationship. If this is gone, then there is no more relationship. Respect just like a living creature needs nourishment, warmth, and protection. Consistency to work hard to maintain it is a life long commitment.

Ergo, respect begets respect they say. The more we give it, the more we receive.

Thank you for the dedication to answer your homework.

-T. Donna =)

I think proper respect is one of the most important element for strengthening the long-term relationship. Even for a really close relationship like the family, I think one need a respect to maintain the relationship healthy.
>> I think proper respect is one of the most important elements for strengthening a long-term relationship. Even for a really close relationship like the family, I think one needs respect to maintain the relationship healthy.

 It is more easy to overlook the importance of respect as closer the relationship is. However, if one forget to respect the other repetitively, it will hurt the other continuously which will eventually ruin the relationship. 
>>  It is easier to overlook the importance of respect the closer the relationship is. However, if one forgets to respect the other repetitively, it will hurt the other continuously which will eventually ruin the relationship. 

We sometimes misunderstood a close person as a outlet of our emotion, and tried to express all the negative emotions like irritation or annoyance to there. We easily confuse that close people can always accept me and be still with us, but it's not true. 
>> We sometimes misunderstand a close person as an outlet of our emotion and try to express all the negative emotions like irritation or annoyance to them. We easily confuse that close people can always accept us and still with us, but it's not true. 

We should always be aware that even the closest person get stressed when the other walk over one repetitively, and the one can leave us someday. Thus, it is important to show appropriate respect to the close person.
>>We should always be aware that even the closest person gets stressed when the other walks over one repetitively this person can leave us someday. Thus, it is important to show appropriation and respect to the close person.
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