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If you can select to go back to the past or go to the future, which one will you choose?

-->1> If I can select to go back to the past, I hope to choose other major of university. I like my job now, but I also want to study pharmacy.
Perhaps it is the influence of my younger brother working as a pharmacist.

2> If I can go to the future, I want to choose my new job after retirement. I don't know exactly what it's like yet, but I want to choose a new one and continue after retirement.

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Hi there Bo Im!

In reality, we cannot get the chance to go back to the past but can certainly go to the future. Our choices today affect what happens in the future. I hope that you make all the best choices for no regrets and a happy life always.

Thank you for this answer to the homework. It seems that you have planned your future with preparation and ease.

-T. Donna =)

1> If I can select to go back to the past, I hope to choose other major of university.
>> If I can select to go back to the past, I hope to choose other major of the/in the university.

 I like my job now, but I also want to study pharmacy.
>> Correct!

Perhaps it is the influence of my younger brother working as a pharmacist.
>> Correct!

2> If I can go to the future, I want to choose my new job after retirement. 
>> Correct!

I don't know exactly what it's like yet, but I want to choose a new one and continue after retirement.
>> Correct!
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