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How do you show that your friends who are also your business partners are important?

--> I tend to express my love through frequent contact. If I am interested in them, I want to know about how they have been, so communicating frequently on SNS is my expression of affection. It is also very important to celebrate their birthdays without forgetting.

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Hello there Bo Im!

I think that you are a very thoughtful person. Communication is key to any relationship may it be friendship, family, colleagues, among others. So when we need to say something or when we ask for help, we we should always be kind and gentle. 

I am grateful for this answer, well done!

See you in a bit.

-T. Donna =)

I tend to express my love through frequent contact. 
>> Correct!

If I am interested in them, I want to know about how they have been, so communicating frequently on SNS is my expression of affection. 
>> Correct!

It is also very important to celebrate their birthdays without forgetting.
>>  Correct!
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