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I think English Fluency is very beneficial to live in this globalized world.

Nowadays, most employers want to hire their employees who have English fluency.
And, English as an international language, we all should know how to speak in English to communicate with people in other country.

For these reasons, I think English fluency is significant for me.

Speaking English fluently becomes my long-term goal. I realized that leaning English is very hard and challenging.
I hope to improve my English skills with Beth.

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Thank you for this Miss Clara! English is indeed a very significant language in this modern society. And if one wants to expand his/her horizon, speaking English is necessary.

I think English Fluency is very beneficial to live in this globalized world.
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Nowadays, most employers want to hire their employees who have English fluency.
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>>> OR: Nowadays, most employers want to hire an employee who has fluency in English.
And, English as an international language, we all should know how to speak in English to communicate with people in other country.
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>>> OR: In addition, English as an international language, we all should know how to speak in English to communicate with people in other countries. 
For these reasons, I think English fluency is significant for me.
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Speaking English fluently becomes my long-term goal. 
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I realized that leaning English is very hard and challenging.
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I hope to improve my English skills with Beth.
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