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I am sad after this article, but that is true.
There are inclulding many serious social issue in Korea.
According to construction low, when the company builds an apartment comples, they have to build public-rental apartment a certain percentage.
Actually some conflicts are happen between parents groups which live in.
Even same district or same school, it is natural that they coexist students who living in expensive apartment and public retal apartments.

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I am sad after this article, but that is true.
>>> I am sad about this article but this is true.
>>> I felt ad about this article but it is a fact.
There are inclulding many serious social issue in Korea.
>>>  There are many included social isses in Korea.
>>> There are many serious social issues in Korea.
According to construction low, when the company builds an apartment comples, they have to build public-rental apartment a certain percentage.
>>> According to constructionw law, when a company builds an apartment complex, they have to build a pbic-rentalapartment at a certain percentage.
Actually some conflicts are happen between parents groups which live in.
>>> Actaully, some conflicts happen between groups of parents in where they live in,
Even same district or same school, it is natural that they coexist students who living in expensive apartment and public retal apartments.
>>> It is natural that students coexist in the same district or school even if  they live in an expensive or public-rental apartments.
>>> Regardless of the apartment, it is natural for students to coexist in the same environment.
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