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I think, The biggest reason of make problem with friends is comfortable.
comfortabe, We can make uncomfortable sometimes.
So, We have to recognize fault, mistake and rude.

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Hi there Ethan!

This is very true on how we offend our friends every now and then because of too much familiarity. As we grow older, we also have some level of sensitivity and we have to respect this boundary when it comes to our friends.

There is a saying that goes, "Do not do unto others what you don't want others do unto you."

So, I will you again on Friday, thanks for this very good homework.

-T. Donna =)

I think, The biggest reason of make problem with friends is comfortable.
>> I think, the biggest reason of making a problem with friends is being comfortable.

comfortabe, We can make uncomfortable sometimes.
>> By being comfortable, we can make them uncomfortable sometimes.

So, We have to recognize fault, mistake and rude.
>> So, we have to recognize our fault, mistake, and rudeness.
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