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How can you promote your country to foreigners?

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Korea has a small land and not much sources for traveling. But we are good at promoting K-pop culture, drama and movie. I can see visitors has an interest in a culture and food. They want to try to eat in the movie and drama. It is a new business in Korea and it quite works nowadays. Korea has many spicy food so visitors want to experience a shocking taste. I can see they feel very suffured from a spice food but they keep trying. It's weired and funny situation. I can see visitors want to do new things. Also, visitors can see our traditional things like they can stay in an old style house which is very unique. I think promoting food and sharing culture is a good way to let people think Korea is an attractive place.

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You have written a meaningful and concise essay, Kaycee! Good job!-Faith-
Korea has a small land and not much sources for traveling. 
>> Korea has a small land and does not have many attractions for traveling. 
But we are good at promoting K-pop culture, drama and movie. 
>> But we are good at promoting K-pop cultures, dramas and movies. 
I can see visitors has an interest in a culture and food. 
>> I can see that visitors have interest in our culture and food. 
They want to try to eat in the movie and drama. 
>> They want to try to eat those food that they saw in movies or dramas. 
It is a new business in Korea and it quite works nowadays. 
>> CORRECT
Korea has many spicy food so visitors want to experience a shocking taste. 
>> Korea has many spicy food so visitors want to experience a new and shocking taste. 
I can see they feel very suffured from a spice food but they keep trying. 
>> I can see they really suffer from spicy food but they keep trying. 
It's weired and funny situation.
>> It's a weird and funny situation. 
I can see visitors want to do new things. 
>> CORRECT
OR It seems that they are willing to try new things.
Also, visitors can see our traditional things like they can stay in an old style house which is very unique. 
>> Also, visitors can see our traditional things, like they can stay in an old style house which is very unique. 
I think promoting food and sharing culture is a good way to let people think Korea is an attractive place.
>> I think promoting food and sharing culture are good ways to let people think that Korea is an attractive place.
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