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What are some of the benefits and disadvantages of electric cars?

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The first of all, Electric cars don't need fuel. When we go to somewhere by electric cars, we can save money. The electric cars don't have an internal-combustion engine. It means that electric cars break down rarely than before cars. But, an electric car is more expensive than an engine car. The last thing is that there are few electricity charging station, even if electric cars need longer time to charge than engine cars.

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Hi, Hwanny! :)
Thank you for sharing your ideas about our essay question.
You have explained your answer quite well.
With the depleting oil reserves all over the world, I honestly think that electric cars are the future of transportation.
Anyhow, I hope you are having a great evening.
See you again in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry


The first of all, Electric cars don't need fuel.
>> First of all, electric cars don't need fuel.
When we go to somewhere by electric cars, we can save money.
>> When we go somewhere by electric cars, we can save money.
The electric cars don't have an internal-combustion engine.
>> CORRECT!
It means that electric cars break down rarely than before cars.
>> It means that electric cars rarely break down as compared to cars that consume fuel.
But, an electric car is more expensive than an engine car.
>> But, an electric car is more expensive than an fuel-engine car.
The last thing is that there are few electricity charging station, even if electric cars need longer time to charge than engine cars
>>The last thing is that there are few electricity charging stations for electric cars and they need a longer time to charge unlike fuel-engine cars
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