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I prefer food at home because.
It is also delicious and also very healthy.
you know what ingredients and thing that you put in.
It is a better way to get delicious and healthy food to eat.
Restaurant food is delicious but not healthy.
It could be healthy, but we don\'t know what the chef has put in.
The question is \'is it safe for me to eat?\'
and \'is the food in good condition?\'
So, I think the healthier and better choice is cooking food of your one.
at your house.

thank you^^

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Hi, Yuri!

Wow! That looks really yummy! I want to try that~
Great answer! Yes, you are right. Food at home are always the best.

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^

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I prefer food at home because. It is also delicious and also very healthy.
>> I prefer food at home because it is delicious and also very healthy.
you know what ingredients and thing that you put in.
>> You know what ingredients and things you put in it. 
It is a better way to get delicious and healthy food to eat.
>> Correct! 
Restaurant food is delicious but not healthy.
>> Restaurant food is delicious, but not healthy.
It could be healthy, but we don\'t know what the chef has put in.
>> It could be healthy, but we don't know what the chef has put in it. 
The question is \'is it safe for me to eat?\'and \'is the food in good condition?\'
>> The question is, "Is it safe for me to eat?" and "Is the food in good condition?"
So, I think the healthier and better choice is cooking food of your one.at your house.
>> So, I think the healthier and better choice is cooking food of your own at your house.
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