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I don¡¯t usually use English in my daily life.
However I try to read English books to my children and I watch TV in English with my children.
Sometimes my boss talk to me in English to improve his English skill.
10 years ago my English skill was much better than him, but he has been practising hardly.
So now he can speak English fluently. I was motivated by him to learn English again.

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Hi Jinny!
Motivation comes from un expected places.
I hope you use this as inspiration to improve yourself.
I'm glad you're on the right track.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don¡¯t usually use English in my daily life.
>> Correct
However I try to read English books to my children and I watch TV in English with my children.
>> However, I try to read English books to my children and I watch English shows on TV with my children.
Sometimes my boss talk to me in English to improve his English skill.
>> Sometimes, my boss speaks to me in English to improve his English skills.
10 years ago my English skill was much better than him, but he has been practising hardly.
>> 10 years ago, my English skills were much better than his, but he has been practicing hard.
So now he can speak English fluently. 
>> So now, he can speak English fluently. 
I was motivated by him to learn English again.
>> Correct
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