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In your opinion, which season is the most beautiful?

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I think spring is the most beautiful season. In many ways, spring is the season everything is started. The flowers will be in fill bloom, some students will go new school or class, also other people will plan goals.

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Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

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Here are my corrections for you:


I think spring is the most beautiful season. 

>> CORRECT!

In many ways, spring is the season everything is started. 

>> In many ways, spring is the season where everything is starting. 

The flowers will be in fill bloom, some students will go new school or class, also other people will plan goals.

>> The flowers will be in full bloom, some students will go to a new school or class, and other people will plan goals.

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