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My power_english teacher broke it me....
He is my best teacher.. but soon, I will meet my new power_english teacher tonight...
I'm very expect! I know some information.....
My new teacher's name is Annie..
It is uncertain information but I think maybe this
Information will be corrrect.
But... I don't now well about my new teacher 'Annie'. Annie will be my second teacher.
Umm .. I hope to have great time my first meet with Annie.......
I want to learn good english studies with annie.
I joined to power english in 2020 February.
I will be the good english speaker. I will do my best and litsen hard.
I think.... Annie will be my best english teacher... I'm very expect now.. I want to meet annie quickly!! We will have a great first meet!! Thank you for reading and bye bye~~~~

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Hi Daniel! Thank you for writing this essay. I understand if you are  sad because you are missing your  former teacher, but don't worry I promise that I will do my very best to be a good teacher to you  as I'll help you learn English well. By the way, I like the way you expressed your honest thoughts about me.  I hope you'll enjoy our class together. See you soon!:)

~T. Annie



My power_english teacher broke it me....
>>My English teacher broke my heart.
He is my best teacher.. but soon, I will meet my new power_english teacher tonight...
>>She is the best teacher, but  I will meet my new English teacher tonight.
I'm very expect! I know some information.....
>>I'm  expecting something from my new teacher as I know some information her.
My new teacher's name is Annie..
>>My new teacher's name is Annie.
It is uncertain information but I think maybe this
>>It is uncertain information but I think this information might correct.
But... I don't now well about my new teacher 'Annie'. Annie will be my second teacher.
>>I don't now well about my new teacher. 
Annie will be my second teacher.
>>Annie will be my new teacher.
Umm .. I hope to have great time my first meet with Annie.......
>> I hope to have a great time meeting teacher Annie for the first time.
I want to learn good english studies with annie.
>>I want to learn English  well with teacher Annie.
I joined to power english in 2020 February.
>>I joined  Power English in February, 2020 .
I will be the good english speaker. 
>>I will be a good English speaker. 
>>I will do my best and litsen hard.
>>I will do my best to learn and listen well.
I think.... Annie will be my best english teacher
>>I think Annie will be my best English teacher.
 I'm very expect now
>> I'm very excited now!
I want to meet Annie quickly!! 
>>I want to meet Annie soon!!
We will have a great first meet!! 
>>We will have a great first class!! 
Thank you for reading and bye bye~~~~
>>Thanks for reading. bye!
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