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-What are the beautiful places that you have visited in Korea? Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.


Have you ever been to Busan in Korea. It is a big city. My family visited Busan several times. I think that Busan has a conbination both a downtown feel and countryside feel. If you visit there, you can know of what a dialect is in Korea. And you can taste the flavor in the town. Also there are surely a beautiful beach, local markets and a lot of high buildings. Whenever I go there I feel cool.

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Hi, Rachel! Thanks for accomplishing your homework. I haven't been to Busan, but I think it's a wonderful place as I've also heard a lot of good experiences from other students. How I wish to travel there as well to experience all the things that you mentioned.  Again, Thanks for expressing your idea about Busan. Keep safe Rachel!

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-What are the beautiful places that you have visited in Korea? Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.



Have you ever been to Busan in Korea. 
>>Have you ever been to Busan in Korea?
It is a big city. 
>>Correct!
My family visited Busan several times. 
>>Correct!
I think that Busan has a conbination both a downtown feel and countryside feel. 
>>I think  Busan has a combination of both city and countryside vibe.
If you visit there, you can know of what a dialect is in Korea.
>>If you would visit there, you could know the local dialect in Korea.
 And you can taste the flavor in the town. 
>>You can taste the various flavor of food in the town.
Also there are surely a beautiful beach, local markets and a lot of high buildings. 
>>Also, there are  beautiful beaches, local markets and a lot of high buildings. 
Whenever I re I go the feel cool.
>> Whenever I go, it feels cool.
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