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Can you give me one superstition in South Korea? Explain in detail.

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I don't know that this superstition is also exist in the other countries, but in South Korea, there is a superstition about areas.
If there are some good news at a particular area, people believe that the area is a good area.
They think that the areas are really special so they think that a lot of works in there will be successful.
The famous example about it is in South Korea, a lot of people buy lottery in the lottery market that has many lottery winner.
If there are some lottery winner in some markets, they think that the area of the markets are really special.
So they go to buy lottery to the markets which had many lottery winners.

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Hi John:) 

Wow. This is the first time I have hear of this superstition. I wonder what's the origin of it. Thanks for sharing. 

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I don't know that this superstition is also exist in the other countries, but in South Korea, there is a superstition about areas.
>> I don't know whether this superstition exists in other countries but there is a superstition here in South Korea were we belive that certain areas are good or bad. 

If there are some good news at a particular area, people believe that the area is a good area.
>> CORRECT

They think that the areas are really special so they think that a lot of works in there will be successful.
>> They think that the areas are really special so most works there will be successful. 

The famous example about it is in South Korea, a lot of people buy lottery in the lottery market that has many lottery winner.
>> For example, people started buying lottery ticket when there was a person that won in it;. 

If there are some lottery winner in some markets, they think that the area of the markets are really special.
>> If there are some lottery winner in some markets, they think that the area where they bought it is special.

So they go to buy lottery to the markets which had many lottery winners.
>> So they will buy lottery tickets a the the markets which had many lottery winners.

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