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Who is the best and worst president of South Korea?

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First, the worst president is Jun Du Hwan. He was the main culprit who caused the May 18 Gwangju democratization movement. A lot of people died then. And I don't know who is the best president of South Korea. That's the same. :)

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Hi Elic:)

Most of my Korean student feel the same way about this. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

First, the worst president is Jun Du Hwan. 
>> CORRECT

He was the main culprit who caused the May 18 Gwangju democratization movement. 
>> CORRECT

A lot of people died then. 
>> CORRECT

And I don't know who is the best president of South Korea. 
>> CORRECT

That's the same. :)
>> They are all the same. :) 
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