¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*À±
2022-02-04 653

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I don't think fishing is a popular hobby for young people
I've heard of some friends fishing in Korea.
But no one seems to fish in Switzerland.
It seems to be popular with older people though.
Because there are many fishing boats near the river.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good morning Ji Yun! 
I think you're right. Young people prefer active activities than boring ones. 
See you later! 

I don't think fishing is a popular hobby for young people
>>> CORRECT!
I've heard of some friends fishing in Korea.
>>> I've heard of some friends went fishing in Korea.
But no one seems to fish in Switzerland.
>>> CORRECT!
It seems to be popular with older people though.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there are many fishing boats near the river.
>>> CORRECT! 
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
115490 Do you give money to homeless people? Do you think people should... ±è*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 562
115489 Essay ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 857
115488 If I can live other city ÀÌ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 900
115487 How do you think can parents encourage their kids to do physical... ±è*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 1765
115486 What are the advantages of technology? ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 655
115485 Dog and park ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 760
115484 What is \"fake news\"? Á¶*¿Ï ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 976
115483 Which is better, online medical consultations or face-to-face... ±è*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 519
115482 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 439
115481 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 2
115480 Homework ¿À*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 572
115479 Why do people commit crimes? ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 1
115478 Can you give me one superstition in South Korea? Explain in... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 0
115477 homework Àü*¾÷ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 511
115476 Homework ¹Ú*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 368
115475 When I\'m worn out. ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 1
115474 If there is a place where you wished to be born, where would it... ¾ö*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 623
115473 homework °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 0
115472 Good evening! °­*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 523
115471 If you can live in another city in South Korea, which one will... ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-01-11 619

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04