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I do not really have a bad habit. When I need to choose something like that, then just farting? 😅 I will practice gonna be a gentleman.

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Hi David,
Bad habits interrupt your life and prevent you from accomplishing your goals. They jeopardize your health both mentally and physically. And they waste your time and energy. Always be good. Have a great weekend.. ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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I do not really have a bad habit. 
>>I do not really have a bad habit. 
When I need to choose something like that, then just farting?
>>When I need to choose something like that, then just farting is I think my bad habit that annoys other people.
 I will practice gonna be a gentleman.
>>  I will practice being a gentleman for me not to annoy other people. 
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I do not really have a bad habit. When I need to choose something like that, then just farting? 😅 I will practice gonna be a gentleman.
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