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How do you feel about making mistakes? Do you worry about it?

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I'm timid and worried. So if I make a mistake, I'll be disappointed and blame myself. Recently I made mistake while working part-time, my face turned red and I was embarrassed. I reflected on my self and resolved not to make a same mistake again. I'm trying not to repeat the same mistake so that I'm not disappointed in myself.

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Good morning Sandy! 
Mistakes are somewhat inevitable in some cases. 
If you will not have any mistakes, then I think you can never learn. 
But it's good to hear that you will do better :) 
Fighting! 
I'm timid and worried. 
>>> CORRECT!
So if I make a mistake, I'll be disappointed and blame myself. 
>>> CORRECT!
Recently I made mistake while working part-time, my face turned red and I was embarrassed. 
>>> Recently, I made a mistake while working part-time, so my face turned red and I was embarrassed.
I reflected on my self and resolved not to make a same mistake again. 
>>> I reflected and vowed not to make the same mistake again.
I'm trying not to repeat the same mistake so that I'm not disappointed in myself.
>>> I try not to repeat the same mistake so as not to be disappointed in myself.

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