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If you can pick a superpower that you can have, what would it be and why?

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Hahaha, I think it's an imagination that everyone thought about when they were young. In my case, I will pick a superpower that It's a mind reading. It's because I want to be close to everyone.

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Hi Elic :)

Imagine the possibilities if you have that superpower. You can do tons of things with it. Like what they say, "Great power comes with great responsibilities."

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Hahaha, I think it's an imagination that everyone thought about when they were young. 
>> CORRECT

In my case, I will pick a superpower that It's a mind reading. 
>> In my case, I will pick the superpower where I can read minds. 

It's because I want to be close to everyone.
>> It's because I want to be close with everyone.

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