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Q : What is your specific task during family gatherings? Share your answer in a few sentences.
I am the first daughter of my family. So, I have been grow up independence and responsible personality. However, I not good at take care of my family. Becoming These days. I try to be in charge of the first daughter.

4. He is revolution and challenge story.
>> He is revolutionary and

I want to know the latter part.

Thank you Donna! Have a happy weekend.

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Happy Friday, Hae Ju!

First of all, I have already incorporated the #4 entry on your page and here below. I really appreciate your effort in reading all of your sentences on the grammar part of your page. I also apologize for the incomplete sentence suggestion.

Then, being the first daughter spells responsibility and tasks. When you were younger, this may not be clear to you but now that you have come to be an adult, these obligations are realized.

My suggestions on grammar are just a few below. I am sure that you will go over them, so be keen on the patterns. Very good with all of your correct sentences!

Have a blast this weekend!

-T. Donna =)

I am the first daughter of my family. 
>> Correct!

So, I have been grow up independence and responsible personality. 
>> So, I have grown up independently and have a responsible personality. 

However, I not good at take care of my family. 
>> However, I'm not good at taking care of my family. 

Becoming These days. I try to be in charge of the first daughter.
>>  These days, I try to be in charge as the first daughter.

4. He is revolution and challenge story.
>> He is revolutionary and
>> He was revolutionary and had a challenging story.

I want to know the latter part.
>> Correct!

Thank you Donna! Have a happy weekend.
>> Correct!
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