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ANSWER YOUER HOMEWORK QUESTION!

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HELLO, T.VIOLET.
I AM HARAM.
I ANSWER YOURE QUESTION.
ANSWER: I AM NOT EXPERIENCE THIS HAPPEN.
BUT, IF HAPPEN THIS.
I THINK I DON NOT CARE ABOUT THAT.
THANK U FOR READING MY ANSWER.
AND GOOD BYE!

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Hello HaRam!

You finally tried answering my homework!   Thank you so much for your effort in answering the question "Schools should block sites like YouTube, Facebook, and Instagram on their computers. What do you think?". I wonder if you really do not care about this, or if it was just hard for you to express your self. Anyway, thank you for trying! I look forward to future Friday homework from you~

For the corrections, Please remember to use proper capitalization. Only the beginning of sentences and names are capitalized (big letters). Also, observe the grammar corrections here~ I hope it can inspire you to do better next time 

Keep it up!
-Teacher Violet. 

HELLO, T.VIOLET. I AM HARAM.
>> Hello, Teacher Violet, I am Ha Ram.

I ANSWER YOURE QUESTION.
>> I will answer your question.

ANSWER: I AM NOT EXPERIENCE THIS HAPPEN.
>> I have never experienced this.

BUT, IF HAPPEN THIS. 
I THINK I DON NOT CARE ABOUT THAT.
>> But if it happens, I think I won't care.

THANK U FOR READING MY ANSWER. AND GOOD BYE!
>> Thank you for reading my answer and goodbye!


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