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I know that Yoon doesn't have political experience enough as a president.

Even he doesn't seem th have much knowledge in several parts.

His wife has many problems about real estate speculation and forgery og academic background.

But he is more honest than Lee. He has passion and leadership.

In the future, he must learn to international knowledge, dipmatic skill including domestic social tasks.

Mr. Lee, when he was young, he was a human right lawyer and citizen activist as a progressive intellectual person.

But he is too greed and dishonest. Only his purpose is to gain political power.

He was already criminal.

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I know that Yoon doesn't have political experience enough as a President.
>>> Correct
Even he doesn't seem th have much knowledge in several parts.
>>> He even doesn't have much knowledge in several areas,
His wife has many problems about real estate speculation and forgery og academic background.
>>> His wife has many problems with real estate speculation and forgery of academic background.
But he is more honest than Lee. He has passion and leadership.
>>> But he is more honest than Mr. Lee. He has passion and leadership.
In the future, he must learn to international knowledge, dipmatic skill including domestic social tasks.
>>> In the future, he must learn international knowledge, diplomatic skills including domestic social tasks.
Mr. Lee, when he was young, he was a human right lawyer and citizen activist as a progressive intellectual person.
>>> Mr. Lee hen he was young was a human rights lawyer and a citizen activist as a progressive intellectual person.
But he is too greed and dishonest. Only his purpose is to gain political power.
>>>  But he was too greedy and dishonest. Only his purpose is to gain political power.
He was already criminal.
>>> He was already a criminal.
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