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HOMEWORK:
How can you eat healthier? Answer in a few sentences.

There are many ways to make us healthier. We able to eat clean food like vegetables, fruits, black beans and take carbohydrate, protein, fat with balance. But, It is hard to keep healthy because there are a lot of delicious unhealthy food in the world.

Thank you Donna! I'm always happy to study with you!

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Hello, Hae Ju!

I am always very happy to have class with you and GoReum! You always take my advice and always help yourself achieve better grammar all the time.

Eating food greatly determines our health. So, we really have to think well whatever we put in our mouths. Great job on this homework answer! I agree that eating a well-balanced diet is a must.

Have a great night!

-T. Donna =) 

There are many ways to make us healthier. 
>> Correct!

We able to eat clean food like vegetables, fruits, black beans and take carbohydrate, protein, fat with balance. 
>> We should be able to eat clean food like vegetables, fruits, and black beans and take carbohydrates, protein, and fats with balance. 

But, It is hard to keep healthy because there are a lot of delicious unhealthy food in the world.
>> Correct!
Or: But, it is hard...

Thank you Donna! I'm always happy to study with you!
>> Correct!
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