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What kind of music do you like?

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Actually, I don't like listening to music too much.
I seldom listen to K-Pop.
K-Pop is mixed well with the dance and music, so it becomes culture.

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Good day, Kevin!

Music is one of the finest and easiest ways to entertain ourselves. Since it is our personal taste, there are certain kinds of music that soothe us and make us feel better. Perhaps if not K-Pop, there must be a genre that you love.

Thanks to all of these correct sentences! Excellent job!

Catch you soon!

-T. Donna =)

Actually, I don't like listening to music too much.
>> Correct!

I seldom listen to K-Pop.
>> Correct!

K-Pop is mixed well with the dance and music, so it becomes culture.
>> Correct!
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