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1. Would you like to play in a public garden or park?
I prefer to play in garden, because there are various and special plants.there are more plants in the garden than in the park.



2. What do yon like to do when visiting a park?
I take a walk with my friends. And sometimes we jog and I like to enjoy nature.



3. How are the parks today different from those you visited as a kid?
It¡¯s really different, everyone is wearing masks. Even me.


4. Would you prefer to play in a personal garden or public garden?
I used to like public garden, but personal garden is better these days. It¡¯ll be safer from covid-19

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Hi there, Alice!

These answers are really good! Let's try to answer them in full length later in class and stretch them out up to two minutes.

Catch you soon!

-T. Donna =)

1. Would you like to play in a public garden or park?
I prefer to play in garden, because there are various and special plants.there are more plants in the garden than in the park.
>> Correct!
Or:  I prefer to play in garden, because there are various and special plants. There are more plants in the garden than in the park.



2. What do yon like to do when visiting a park?
I take a walk with my friends. And sometimes we jog and I like to enjoy nature.
>> Correct!
Or: I take a walk with my friends. And sometimes, we jog, and I like to enjoy nature.



3. How are the parks today different from those you visited as a kid?
It¡¯s really different, everyone is wearing masks. Even me.
>> It¡¯s really different, everyone is wearing a mask, even I.


4. Would you prefer to play in a personal garden or public garden?
I used to like public garden, but personal garden is better these days. It¡¯ll be safer from covid-19
>> Correct!
Or: It'll be safer from COVID-19.
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