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I would like to learn make up with cosmetics.
It is likely to be exciting to express my face in different ways.
There are many contents about make up in YOUTUBE.
The make up makes someone looks like different or more beautiful. it is so amazing.
It makes me want to attempt make up.
And to manage my health, i would like to play diverse exercise.
especially i want to learn tennis.
i have heard that tennis needs to strength, speed and skills.
So, i am going to learn tennis When i have much time than now.

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Hi, Jiny!
Thank you for doing your homework. I really think what you've thought of would be really exciting.
-T. Caitlyn
I would like to learn make up with cosmetics.
>> I would like to learn about cosmetics.
It is likely to be exciting to express my face in different ways.
>> It would be exciting to alter my appearance in different ways.
There are many contents about make up in YOUTUBE.
>> There are different content about makeup on YouTube.
The make up makes someone looks like different or more beautiful. it is so amazing.
>> It is amazing that makeups make someone look different or more beautiful.
It makes me want to attempt make up.
>> It makes me want to learn how to apply makeup.
And to manage my health, i would like to play diverse exercise.
>> To manage my health, I would like to try exercising.
especially i want to learn tennis.
>> I especially want to learn how to play tennis.
i have heard that tennis needs to strength, speed and skills. So, i am going to learn tennis When i have much time than now.
>> I heard playing tennis requires strength, speed, and skills so I plan to learn it when I have more free time.
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