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HOMEWORK:
When is the best time to marry? Answer in a few sentences.

Is there a best time to get married? I think It is possible if they are right timing like economic and emotional state. Above of all, they should be prepare for consideration and love for the partner.

I'm sorry for the late homework. See you tomorrow.

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Hello, Hae Ju, good evening!

I think that your ideals of getting married depends on your capacity as well as your maturity to understand that you are both ready to face adversities as a couple. Of course, I also do not know the answer to this mysterious question.^^

I have undelined some of the suggestions I made in grammar. Please go over them well. Your thoughts are sound and meaningful. Thank you very much for doing your homework always!

-T. Donna~

Is there a best time to get married? 
>> Correct!

I think It is possible if they are right timing like economic and emotional state. 
>> Correct!
Or: I think it is possible if they have the right timing like their economic and emotional state. 

Above of all, they should be prepare for consideration and love for the partner.
>> Above of all, they should be prepared for consideration and love for their partner.

I'm sorry for the late homework. See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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