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What is the worst movie you\'ve ever seen?

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2022-11-03 3318

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My worst movie was the most violent movie. I am a moviegoer, so I enjoy watching movies at the cinema rather than at the home theater. I very often go to the cinema and also enjoy the atmosphere of the cinema which is dark with coke and popcorn. It means I stay in the cinema until the movie ends however terrible the movies would be. However, the movie that I watched when I was in high school was only one exception to make me come out in the middle. The movie was full of murder, hitting, attacks, etc. I couldn't help going out because of too deadly and violent stories and scenes. I couldn't focus on the stream of stories, so I can't still remember what the movie was about, and even the title. The only one I remember is too shocking, I had nightmares for some time after a while. Nowadays, I don't like movies including too violent elements.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Miss Sung!^^ 

Thank you for doing your homework. 
The way you described the movie, one thing came to my mind, it was gruesome. 
My imagination is too active, so I don't watch anything that would give me nightmares. 

Andrea 

My worst movie was the most violent movie. 
>> The worst movie for me was the most violent movie I have watched. 

I am a moviegoer, so I enjoy watching movies at the cinema rather than at the home theater. 
>>  I am a moviegoer, I enjoy watching movies in the movie theater rather than at home. 

I very often go to the cinema and also enjoy the atmosphere of the cinema which is dark with coke and popcorn. 
>> I often go to cinemas and enjoy the atmosphere of it, a dark place while having coke and popcorn. 

It means I stay in the cinema until the movie ends however terrible the movies would be.
>> It means, I stay in the cinema until the movie ends even how terrible the movie would be. 

However, the movie that I watched when I was in high school was only one exception to make me come out in the middle. 
>> However, the movie that I I've watched when I was in high school was the only exception that I needed to go out in the middle of the movie. 

The movie was full of murder, hitting, attacks, etc. 
>> The movie was full of murder's, violence, attacks, etc. 

I couldn't help going out because of too deadly and violent stories and scenes. 
>> I couldn't help going out because the fatality was too high, brutal story and scenes. 

I couldn't focus on the stream of stories, so I can't still remember what the movie was about, and even the title. 
>> I couldn't focus on the stream of the story, I still couldn't remember what the movie was about, not even the title. 

The only one I remember is too shocking, I had nightmares for some time after a while. 
>> The only thig I remember, it was too shocking, I had nightmares for quite sometime. 

Nowadays, I don't like movies including too violent elements.
>> Nowadays, I don't like movies that includes traumatizing elements. 
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