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Homework: In Korea, all students take exams together. The problem with this is that it simply ranks students as tests. Even if a student has special talent, it is often rated low on standardized tests. So, among the highly successful people, they are treated as problem children during their school days or have experiences of not being able to adapt to school life.

Society should allow people with diverse abilities to play roles appropriate to their abilities. That way people don't compare themselves to others, and each one thinks they can do their part more effectively, efficiently and happily. But even so, I think a standard that checks basic individual abilities is necessary. However, I think that if possible, people who want to participate should be involved. or that the result should be used so that it is not mistaken for the person's overall ability

Question:"The tigers of wrath are wiser than the horses of instruction." Can you please explain the meaning easily?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Elliot. I hope all is well with you and your family. Thank you for taking the time to check your feedback and put together an essay for your homework. It is highly appreciated. As to your question, the saying contrasts the behavior of two animals: the wild, untamable tiger and the greatly trainable horse. They are symbols of endless energy and motivation on the one hand, and unthinking training and accepted ideas on the other. It means the tiger who is untamable and wild but has endless energy and motivation is wiser than the trainable horse that follows the standard training and easily accepts ideas without having ideas of its own. I hope I was able to help and if this is still unclear, you can ask me again in our next class.^^ Have a wonderful weekend and I'll talk to you next week. ~Jane c", 


Homework: 

In Korea, all students take exams together. 
>> CORRECT =) 

The problem with this is that it simply ranks students as tests. 
>> The problem with this is that it simply ranks students according to their test scores. 

Even if a student has special talent, it is often rated low on standardized tests. 
>> Even if a student has a special talent, it is often rated low on standardized tests. 

So, among the highly successful people, they are treated as problem children during their school days or have experiences of not being able to adapt to school life. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Society should allow people with diverse abilities to play roles appropriate to their abilities. 
>> CORRECT =) 

That way people don't compare themselves to others, and each one thinks they can do their part more effectively, efficiently and happily. 
>> That way people don't compare themselves to others, and each one thinks they can do their part more effectively, efficiently, and happily. 

But even so, I think a standard that checks basic individual abilities is necessary. 
>> CORRECT =) 

However, I think that if possible, people who want to participate should be involved. or that the result should be used so that it is not mistaken for the person's overall ability
>> CORRECT =) 

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