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Based on your experience as a student, how has doing homework help you with your studies?

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When I was young, I wanted to get praises from teachers so, I tried to finish my homework. And my mom always said that if I want to play with my friends, I have to do all of things in advance. I really wanted to go outside and just play at that time but thanks to my mother, I could take my own responsibility, and send school days as diligent student. Sitting on the chair for studying is difficult to the young. That's why most students have trouble studying long time until they are in high school. I could practice enduring boring and hard time from when I was young. Also, homework was helpful for my self-directed learning. I checked parts that I couldn't understand, and it leads to study hard. I planned my day schedule to study effectively. If there was no one to give homework and teach me, I would send meaningless time with sleeping and watching TV. After I was used to studying, we studied alone even there was no homework. Excessive homework is the problem, but the homework is needed.

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Thank you for this Mary. Good it helped you develop good studying habits.

When I was young, I wanted to get praises from teachers so, I tried to finish my homework. 
>>> correct
And my mom always said that if I want to play with my friends, I have to do all of things in advance. 
>>>  correct
I really wanted to go outside and just play at that time but thanks to my mother, I could take my own responsibility, and send school days as diligent student. 
>>I really wanted to go outside and just play at that time but thanks to my mother, I could take my own responsibility, and spend my school days as a diligent student.  
Sitting on the chair for studying is difficult to the young. 
>>>  correct
That's why most students have trouble studying long time until they are in high school.
>>> That's why most students have trouble studying for a long time until they are in high school.
 I could practice enduring boring and hard time from when I was young. 
>>>  correct
Also, homework was helpful for my self-directed learning. 
>>>  correct 
I checked parts that I couldn't understand, and it leads to study hard. 
>>> I checked parts that I couldn't understand, and it leads to studying harder.
I planned my day schedule to study effectively.
>>>  correct 
If there was no one to give homework and teach me, I would send meaningless time with sleeping and watching TV. 
>>> If there was no one to give homework and teach me, I would spend meaningless time with sleeping and watching TV. 
After I was used to studying, we studied alone even there was no homework. 
>>>   correct 
Excessive homework is the problem, but the homework is needed.
>>>   correct 

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