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If your friend was doing something dangerous or illegal, what would you do?

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2022-12-07 2066

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Hello, teacher. Im writing an answer about your question for the homework. If my friend was doing something dangerous or illegal, I should talk with my friend first. Maybe I might ask the reason why you was doing something bad. And then Im gonna tell that we have to follow the legal to my friend. Because We just follow the role for everyone. It makes us safe. We couldn`t do that. I should explain why we don`t do something illegal or dangerous fully until my friend agree with my opinion that we have an appointment each other.

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Great answer, Soo! ^_^ Being friends with someone doesn't mean that we will support them in everything they do. In fact, as their friend, we should be guiding them to become better versions of themselves especially when they commit mistakes. You're certainly a true friend! :)
~T.Harmony <3

If my friend was doing something dangerous or illegal, I should talk with my friend first.
>> If my friend was doing something dangerous or illegal, the first I should do is confront my friend.
Maybe I might ask the reason why you was doing something bad.
>> I might ask for the reason behind why they did it.
And then Im gonna tell that we have to follow the legal to my friend.
>> I will then proceed to inform my friend that we need to follow the law.
Because We just follow the role for everyone.
>> Because it is necessary that everyone follows the rules.
It makes us safe.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> It keeps us safe.
We couldn`t do that.
>> We should refrain from doing illegal acts.
I should explain why we don`t do something illegal or dangerous fully until my friend agree with my opinion that we have an appointment each other.
>> I should explain in full detail why we're not supposed to do something illegal or dangerous. I won't stop until my friend completely understands and agrees with me.
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